The strongest one is the bottom shot of the fraying wall and telephone poles with wires... the light and color is good. Everything works together. One one just above it is not as successful... The reason is that first and foremost Photography is about light.... Where is the light? Does the focal point coincide with the light? The graphic interest of the metal stairs is a bit lost in the shadow and the bright light in the upper left side draws your eye out of the frame and away from the geometry of the stairs.
The one above that would be strengthened by cropping that tiny bit of blue sky but it is on the right track. The one above that of the zoom in on the building detail is on point in terms of composition and geometry but is weakened by the inability of phone cameras to zoom optically... images break down quickly with digital zooming as it uses smaller and smaller parts of an already small image sensor.
The strongest one is the bottom shot of the fraying wall and telephone poles with wires... the light and color is good. Everything works together. One one just above it is not as successful... The reason is that first and foremost Photography is about light.... Where is the light? Does the focal point coincide with the light? The graphic interest of the metal stairs is a bit lost in the shadow and the bright light in the upper left side draws your eye out of the frame and away from the geometry of the stairs.
ReplyDeleteThe one above that would be strengthened by cropping that tiny bit of blue sky but it is on the right track. The one above that of the zoom in on the building detail is on point in terms of composition and geometry but is weakened by the inability of phone cameras to zoom optically... images break down quickly with digital zooming as it uses smaller and smaller parts of an already small image sensor.